The table and chart below provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount of money spent by students per week while studying abroad in 4 countries.
The table and bar chart provide information about students' expenditures in foreign
countries
. Therefore
spend money on living spaces, academies, and cost of living. The units are measured in dollars.
Overall
, out of four countries
namely A, B
, C, and D. The largest amount
is spent on studies by country A while
the Second highest, is b
whereas
, the least is d. However
, in the case of other things like accommodation. Living cost the bar chart shows the increasing trend in all the three
countries
except for d as it shows slight variations.
Firstly
, start with A the heavy amount
of money is spent on studying about 875$ is greater as compare
to all Change the form of the verb
compared
three
countries
. While
735$ is spent on b
and the lowest amount
is spent on D THAT IS
ABOUT 435$.
In the case of the bar chart, it shows an upward trend in all three
nations except for d Correct pronoun usage
which
it
shows a slight variation. Considering Correct pronoun usage
which
countries
a, b
, and c show a rise in all three
necessities and A spent a heavy amount
in contrast
to others b
lies in second and c stands third while
in d large people spent on studies and less on accommodation and slightly above in living cost.Submitted by aimenmalik2021 on
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