The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity.

The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing
electricity
from coal.
Overall
, the procedure involves five main steps: extraction of coal, conversion of coal into
gas
, cooling and filtration of the
gas
, generation of
electricity
, and transmission of
electricity
to end users.
Initially
, coal is extracted from mining points. The raw coal is
then
crushed into finer pieces and transported by trucks to a gasifier. In the gasifier, the crushed coal is heated at a high temperature, converting it into a gaseous form. The
gas
is
then
transferred to a different facility for the condensing phase, where it is cooled, and excess heat is removed. Once the
gas
reaches the desired temperature, it undergoes a cleaning process to remove any impurities. The cleaned
gas
is
then
passed to a
gas
power plant, where it is used to generate
electricity
. During
this
process, residual heat is discharged as a by-product.
Finally
, the produced
electricity
is transmitted through power lines to residential and industrial areas.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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