The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing
electricity
from coal.
Overall
, the procedure involves five main steps: extraction of coal, conversion of coal into gas
, cooling and filtration of the gas
, generation of electricity
, and transmission of electricity
to end users.
Initially
, coal is extracted from mining points. The raw coal is then
crushed into finer pieces and transported by trucks to a gasifier. In the gasifier, the crushed coal is heated at a high temperature, converting it into a gaseous form. The gas
is then
transferred to a different facility for the condensing phase, where it is cooled, and excess heat is removed.
Once the gas
reaches the desired temperature, it undergoes a cleaning process to remove any impurities. The cleaned gas
is then
passed to a gas
power plant, where it is used to generate electricity
. During this
process, residual heat is discharged as a by-product. Finally
, the produced electricity
is transmitted through power lines to residential and industrial areas.Submitted by adebimpeanimawun on
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