The charts below give the amount of financial aid that four countries received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below give the amount of financial aid that four countries received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The
given
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bar chart compares information about the distribution of monetary support in three aspects ,
meanwhile
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the table represents how much money was spent in each country in two years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
on all sides cash spending decreased during the present years. Many nations dramatically changed the number of the means for these categories.
Firstly
, all sides had downward trends , what’s
more
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catering had an enormous change from 70
million
in 1974 to 15
million
in 2014. Medicine where donated more quantity of money went down to second place with almost 60
million
. Finance too had a minor decline ,
however
became the first.
Secondly
, China and Thailand significantly reduced costs between 1974 and 2014 . China changed it from 62
million
to 6
million
, at the same time
Thailand
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spendings
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collapsed from 48
million
till
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18. Meanwhile, South Africa’s financial aid
spendings
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spending
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fell from 65 to 42
million
. Indonesia reduced the expenditure of money by 25
million
.
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