The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four countries received and the way the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The
given
chart and table Verb problem
apply
demonstrates
the quantity of financial allowance which Correct subject-verb agreement
demonstrate
were
taken and spent by four countries in 1974 and 30 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
years
later.
Overall
, in 1974 the biggest amount of money
was spent for
finances and the lowest Change preposition
on
for
catering, Change preposition
on
while
30
Change preposition
in 30
years
both of them got equal monetary support and biggest
sum of Add an article
the biggest
a biggest
money
was given to medicine. Also
, in
Change preposition
apply
this
year China
, Indonesia, Thailand and South Africa received different amounts of money
with big
spread in which Add an article
a big
the big
smallest
part took Correct article usage
the smallest
China
and biggest
sum took South Africa, meanwhileCorrect article usage
the biggest
30years
earlier all for countries received Correct your spelling
30 years
similar
quantity of cash.
Add an article
a similar
Firstly
,In 1974 for “Catering”
and “Finance” aspects were allocated Correct article usage
the “Catering”
equal
amount of cash 70 Correct article usage
an equal
millions
and for Change to singular
million
“Medicine”
section Correct article usage
the “Medicine”
allotted
10 Add a missing verb
was allotted
millions
more, Change to singular
million
Whereas
30 years
after that, for “catering
” was allocated Capitalize word
Catering
15million
, for “medicine” four times more and for “finance” aspect was given the most of sum 65millions.
Correct your spelling
15 million
Secondly
, In 1974 Indonesia received 55 millions
, which is 7 Change to singular
million
millions
more than Thailand’s obtained cash. In Change to singular
million
this
year China
took 62 millions
which is Change to singular
million
3millions
less than South Africa’s gotten Correct your spelling
3 million
money
. After 30 years
the lowest amount of money
allotted China
which is equal to 6000000. Thailand Change preposition
to China
gotten
3 times more than Add the auxiliary verb
got
China
, Indonesia 5 times more and South Africa allocated 42000000.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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