Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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As some individuals argue that governments must cover all the course
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for university
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, I agree with complete funding
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for the undergraduates because
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will help a lot of households and
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will
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talented
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to contribute to society a lot.
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the tuition
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for academia are very expensive, there are many
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in the world who resign from entering college because they can’t afford it even though they are smart and only if the course
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were free for any eligible individual, many households would be able to gain more payment in the future.
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, in Japan or other developed nations, military schools are usually free for domestic
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and
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works very well for achieving the individual's goal which
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enables them to gain more money even after they finish the mandatory deployment because they can work at a better company than they would have worked without a bachelor's degree.
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, equal financial
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for the
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leads to the
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flourishment of one country.
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to say, no one knows if someone is talented and is going to contribute more to the country from just a look at the certificate of achievements. By supporting everyone in universities, a country can produce more talented and motivated
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.
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, in Japan, there are several medical schools without any tuition
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and the
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there are generally more concentrated on what they want to pursue, more independent and more confident in themselves than those in other medical schools and they tend to work harder than anybody else. In conclusion, I totally agree with the idea of the government paying all the
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for university
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; it can
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many households, it produces equality of chance and it leads to the maturity of a nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Higher education
  • University tuition
  • Public good
  • Economic growth
  • Fiscal responsibility
  • Merit-based scholarships
  • Need-based grants
  • Socioeconomic status
  • Educational equity
  • Income-contingent loans
  • Graduate tax
  • Financial aid
  • Student loans
  • Subsidize
  • Taxpayer funding
  • Underappreciation
  • Workforce development
  • Access to education
  • Higher learning institutions
  • Government expenditure
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