Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
As some individuals argue that governments must cover all the course
fees
for university students
, I agree with complete funding support
for the undergraduates because this
will help a lot of households and this
will support
talented students
to contribute to society a lot.
Although
the tuition fees
for academia are very expensive, there are many students
in the world who resign from entering college because they can鈥檛 afford it even though they are smart and only if the course fees
were free for any eligible individual, many households would be able to gain more payment in the future. For example
, in Japan or other developed nations, military schools are usually free for domestic students
and this
works very well for achieving the individual's goal which further
enables them to gain more money even after they finish the mandatory deployment because they can work at a better company than they would have worked without a bachelor's degree.
Furthermore
, equal financial support
for the students
leads to the further
flourishment of one country. That is
to say, no one knows if someone is talented and is going to contribute more to the country from just a look at the certificate of achievements. By supporting everyone in universities, a country can produce more talented and motivated students
. For instance
, in Japan, there are several medical schools without any tuition fees
and the students
there are generally more concentrated on what they want to pursue, more independent and more confident in themselves than those in other medical schools and they tend to work harder than anybody else.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the idea of the government paying all the fees
for university students
; it can support
many households, it produces equality of chance and it leads to the maturity of a nation.Submitted by kana_ayaki on
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