The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table compares the length of the route and the number of passengers per
year
in millions of underground railway systems in six cities.
It is clear that
London
has the oldest
subway
system
,
while
, the newest one is for Los Angeles.
Also
, we could see that
Tokyo
's metro
system
has by far the most passengers each
year
.
London
's underground railway arrangement opened in 1863, which is the oldest
subway
scheme in the table, and the newest one provided by Los Angeles opened in 2001. Paris opened its underground transportation
system
in 1900, and 27 years later, in 1926, the
subway
system
in
Tokyo
started to work. Washington DC and Kyoto opened their
subway
system
in 1976 and 1981, respectively. With 394 kilometres,
London
has by far the longest route of the underground railway,
while
Kyoto and Los Angeles have the least, below 30 kilometres. The length of the underground
system
route of the Paris,
Tokyo
, and Washington DC are between 126 and 199 kilometres. About the number of passengers, with 1927
million
people each
year
,
Tokyo
's metro
system
transportation placed at the top, and the second one provided by Paris with 1191
million
people.
While
775
million
citizens use
London
's underground transportation systems each
year
, the number for the other three countries is below 150
million
people per
year
.
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