The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the performance of three different branches of a chain of restaurants in three different locations in Vancouver for the year 2016. It is evident that the best performer is the
branch
in
Georgia
Street
, which with 854
transactions
a day on average has at least 100 more
transactions
than
Dunsmuir
Street
and more than double
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Drake
Street
.
Georgia
Street
is
also
ahead in terms of
average
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transaction value (ATV), with $10.69 per transaction compared to
Dunsmuir
Street’s
$5.61 and
Drake
Street’s
$9.02. On average, eat-in and
take-away
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transactions
are almost equal in each restaurant, with
take-away
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transactions
ending slightly ahead in two of them.
Drake
Street
is the only exception, with eat-in
transactions
surpassing take-away by 10. The table
also
gives us information about the most popular item in each
branch
, revealing that the eating
habit
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of customers in each area are widely varied:
Georgia
Street’s
best seller is Chicken Burger,
while
Dunsmuir
Street’s
customers favour Chicken Wings, and
Drake
Street’s
customers prefer Chicken Pasta. 
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
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Georgia
Street’s
branch
is the company’s most profitable
branch
, with the highest number of
transactions
and ATV.
Drake
Street
,
on the other hand
, lags far behind, despite the fact that its ATV is higher than
Dunsmuir
Street
.
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