The maps show changes that have taken place in Grange park from 1930 to untill now.

The maps show changes that have taken place in Grange park from 1930 to untill now.
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The map illustrates the developments which have taken in Grange Park since 1920.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the park has changed considerably and the six new features can be seen in the second map. In 1920, the rose
garden
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and pond for water plants were located in the north-west of the
garden
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. Today, they have been transformed into the cafe and children's play area, respectively. The Glasshouse was situated in the south-west was demolished and a new water feature has been built. The most noticeable is that the new Rose
garden
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has been established in the centre of the
garden
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instead
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of the fountain.
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, the stage for musicians was demolished in order to build an Amphitheatre for concerts near the new Rose
Garden
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. In the northeast, the rose
garden
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has remained and all seats in the
garden
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have been moved to the centre, around the new Rose
garden
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.
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, a new underground car park has been constructed at the under of the water feature, in the southwest of the
garden
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words garden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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