The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of people who visited three London museums over a period of 5 years, from 2007 to 2012.
It is clear that
the number
of visits to the National Gallery Museum
experienced a significant rise through the period shown, however
, for the Victoria and Albert Museum
it was the opposite.
From 2007 to 2009, the number
of citizens who visited the National Gallery museum
rose steadily, from 5.5 million
visits per year
to roughly 8 million
. In the following year
, the number
of visitors
became 11 million
per year
,
and remained constant till 2012. Remove the comma
apply
Finally
, in 2012 the number
of visitors
to the National Gallery Museum
reached a peak of 16 million
annual visitors
.
The figure for Victoria and Albert Museum
started at 14 million
visitors
per year
in 2007, but it fell to 7 million
in 2010, and after experiencing some fluctuations, it reached 10 million
. In 2007, approximately 13 million
people visited the British Museum
, however
, from 2008 to 2010, the number
of visitors
was below 7 million
people, but after 2010, the figure started to rise and reached 14 million
visitors
annually.Submitted by amir1375.6 on
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