The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012.

The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of people who visited three London museums over a period of 5 years, from 2007 to 2012.
It is clear that
the
number
of visits to the National Gallery
Museum
experienced a significant rise through the period shown,
however
, for the Victoria and Albert
Museum
it was the opposite. From 2007 to 2009, the
number
of citizens who visited the National Gallery
museum
rose steadily, from 5.5
million
visits per
year
to roughly 8
million
. In the following
year
, the
number
of
visitors
became 11
million
per
year
,
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and remained constant till 2012.
Finally
, in 2012 the
number
of
visitors
to the National Gallery
Museum
reached a peak of 16
million
annual
visitors
. The figure for Victoria and Albert
Museum
started at 14
million
visitors
per
year
in 2007, but it fell to 7
million
in 2010, and after experiencing some fluctuations, it reached 10
million
. In 2007, approximately 13
million
people visited the British
Museum
,
however
, from 2008 to 2010, the
number
of
visitors
was below 7
million
people, but after 2010, the figure started to rise and reached 14
million
visitors
annually.
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