The pie charts show the spending habits of citizens in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The pie charts
describes
on spending habits of people in Change the verb form
describe
UK
between 1971 and 2001.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, it is readily visible that the waste of
habits of Change preposition
apply
British
significantly changed during the period.Correct article usage
the British
Also
in both Fix the agreement mistake
terms
term
they had habits mostly from cars and Add a comma
term,
foods
, Fix the agreement mistake
food
while
amount
spent on computers increased in the UK.
In 1971 British spent 44% on food which was the highest percentage among the cost categories.The second highest spending in 1971 was on cars, which constituted 22% of all costs. The lowest is on computers only 2% Add an article
the amount
however
, in 2001 computers
users Fix the agreement mistake
computer
increase
to 12%, Wrong verb form
increased
it
means that Correct pronoun usage
which
time
period depended on it. Furniture during 2 Correct article usage
the time
period
not even changed.
The second pie Change to a plural noun
periods
charts
illustrates Fix the agreement mistake
chart
expense
of Correct article usage
the expense
portion
of people declined from 6% to 1%, Add an article
a portion
while
restaurants to accelerate
2 times Change the verb form
accelerated
mors
than Correct your spelling
more
1971
.The highest amount spent in 2001 by the British was on cars and that consisted Change preposition
in 1971
almost
half of the total expenses in Change preposition
of almost
this
year.Correct determiner usage
that
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