The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in household in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs indicate the
percentae
of households with washing Correct your spelling
percentage
Use synonyms
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
, and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vacuum
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cleaner
and the Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
number
of Use synonyms
hours
of Use synonyms
housework
per household between 1920 and 2019. The Use synonyms
overall
trends show the percentage of electrical Linking Words
appliances
Use synonyms
were
increasing Correct subject-verb agreement
was
by
time, Change preposition
over
while
the Linking Words
number
of time spent on Use synonyms
housework
Use synonyms
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
declinining
.
In 1920, not even half of the population owned electrical Correct your spelling
declining
appliances
, Use synonyms
such
as washing Linking Words
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machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigetrator
and Correct your spelling
refrigerators
vacuum
Use synonyms
cleaner
. Only 40% of the households had a washing Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
machine
in 1920, whilst the Use synonyms
percetange
of households who owned Correct your spelling
percentage
refrigerator
and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vacuum
Use synonyms
cleaner
was smaller Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
woth
only 30% and 1% respectively. Correct your spelling
with
This
Linking Words
number
kept increasing every year until the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
family
who had Change to a plural noun
families
vacuum
Use synonyms
cleaner
and Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
refrigerator
in their home reached 100%. Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
Additionaly
, the amount of Correct your spelling
Additionally
family
who chose to buy washing Fix the agreement mistake
families
Use synonyms
machine
was increasing, albeit a smaller rise, with only a 35% increase.
Fix the agreement mistake
machines
Consequently
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
hours
of Use synonyms
housework
per household Use synonyms
were
dropping significantly. In 1920, people spent 50 Change the verb form
was
hours
per Use synonyms
week
doing their Use synonyms
housework
, like washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning. Use synonyms
However
, that Linking Words
number
dropped to only 10 Use synonyms
hours
per Use synonyms
week
in 2019.
All-in-all, there was a negative correlation between the ratio of family with electrical Use synonyms
appliances
and the amount of Use synonyms
housework
per Use synonyms
week
between 1920-2019. The ratio of electrical Use synonyms
Use synonyms
appliances
ownership kept rising, Fix the agreement mistake
appliance
while
the Linking Words
hours
spent Use synonyms
for
doing Change preposition
apply
housework
per Use synonyms
week
kept declining.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, vacuum, number, hours, housework, appliances, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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