You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have changed your job describe your new job tell him/her your other news
Dear Leah,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and best of spirits. It’s been a long time since we caught up. I am writing to inform you that I have changed my job
recently. I had to quit my senior accountant job
from
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at
last
month due to
problems in my commute to the office. As you know they moved their office from Brampton to Oakville thus
, it was hard for me to travel for so long every day.
I am pleased to tell you that I got another job
with HR immigration as a senior accountant as well. Their office is quite near to me, just 30 minutes drive from my home so it is convenient for me as I can spend some quality time with my family as well. Moreover
, the working hours are also
flexible and even I am allowed to work from home for 2 weeks from my home along with
this
, it pays me $4.25 more than my previous job
.
I have some good news my husband is travelling to Australia for his business trip the following month so, we are hosting a huge party at King Hotel, Toronto on July 10,2024. Moreover
, my sister finally
got her degree in law hence
, we are going to celebrate both news together and you are invited.
Waiting to see you soon.
Yours loving,
Navneet Kaur.Submitted by ss6802125 on
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Consider adding a bit more detail about your new role's responsibilities to give a fuller picture of your job change.
coherence cohesion
Make sure there are smooth transitions between different sections of the letter; it can help to use transition words appropriately.
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The writing tone is friendly and personal, which suits the letter to a friend very well.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a specific idea, aiding clarity and understanding.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a greeting and a closing, adhering to the conventions of letter writing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite