Academic Task 1 The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
The line chart illustrates a comparison in monthly changing
price
between Fix the agreement mistake
prices
Nickel
,Copper and Zinc in 2014,.
The data are Change the punctuation
,
.
museared
in percentages.
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mustard
overall
, all metals experianced
a Correct your spelling
experienced
downwared
trend during the first months. Correct your spelling
downward
in
addition , they all rose Capitalize word
In
at
the Change preposition
in
lastes
months Correct your spelling
last
on
the year. The most Change preposition
of
sgnificant
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significant
chang
can be seen in Correct your spelling
change
Nickel
.
on the one hand, Nickel
showes
a Correct your spelling
showed
charp
decline to 1% in March and stayed Correct your spelling
sharp
stabel
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stable
next
month. Correct article usage
the next
However
, the rate go downe dramaticly
and Correct your spelling
down dramatically
reach
Wrong verb form
reached
the
low point Correct article usage
a
at
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in
june
at -3%. Change the capitalization
June
then
it go
up again and Change the verb form
goes
reminde
steady next three months at -1%. Correct your spelling
remained
In
addition
the figure rose to 2% in November and December.
Add a comma
addition,
on the other hand
, the initial percentage of Nickel
is 2% . It rose to 3% before decline
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declining
gradualy
to -1% in Correct your spelling
gradually
june
. Change the capitalization
June
Whereas
, the percentage stayed stable at around -0.5% before go
up and exceeding other metals and being the higher Wrong verb form
going
at the end
of the period. With regareds
to Correct your spelling
regard
Copper
it fluctuated between 2% and -1% throughout the given year.Add a comma
Copper,
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nickel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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