The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables illustrate the number of how many
Fairtrade-labellled
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Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
and bananas in five European countries
were sold in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
, the sales
of coffee
in all five countries
increased over the 5 years, while
Belguim
and Correct your spelling
Belgium
Sweden
had fewer fairtrade
in Correct your spelling
fair trade
banans
. Meanwhile, the Correct your spelling
bananas
sales
of two
products saw a most remarkable upward in Correct article usage
the two
UK
.
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the UK
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UK
sold 1.5 Correct article usage
the UK
millions
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million
of
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euros
of
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in
coffee
in 1999, while
that figure went up to 20 millions
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million
of
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euros
in 2004, which is highly beyond other countries
. Similarly
, other
four Correct article usage
the other
countries
including Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden
had the same rising tendency from 1999 to 2004, but the increasement
of Correct your spelling
increase in
sales
concerning
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coffee
were
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was
millions
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million
of
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euros
.
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bananas
UK
had the highest Correct article usage
the UK
sales
both in 1999 and 2004, with 15 million
euros
and 47 million
euros
respectively. Coincidentally, sales
of bannas
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bananas
also
increased in Switzerland (from 1 to 5.5) and Denmark (from 0.6 to 4). However
, sales
of banans
saw a downward in Correct your spelling
bananas
Belguim
and Correct your spelling
Belgium
Sweden
. In 1999, 1.8 million
euros
of bananse
were sold in Belgium, Correct your spelling
bananas
balance
banana
while
that figure for 2004 was only 1 million
. As for Sweden
, it started with 2 million
in 1999,
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million
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