The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the table provided reveals a number of clear differences between the major
metro
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systems
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of the world in terms of age, scale and annual carrying capacity. One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the more recently established
metro
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systems
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are considerably shorter than the older ones. Completed in 1863, the London
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is the oldest of the
metro
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systems
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listed and
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the longest: built in 1890. The Paris
metro
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is some 594
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in length. In stark contrast ,
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, the Kyoto and Los Angeles
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systems
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established in 1890 and 2001 respectively are far shorter . The former covers a mere 11 kilometers and the latter just 14 kilometers. With regard to yearly carrying capacity, the
metro
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systems
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mentioned in the table vary greatly . The Tokyo
metro
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is equipped to carry the largest number of passengers, at 1434
million
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. With 850
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, Meanwhile, the Paris
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has the
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carrying capacity. The
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with the smallest capacities are those of Kyoto and Washington DC, transporting just 11
million
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and 70
million
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people per year respectively.
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