You have won a holiday to Hawaii with one extra ticket. Write a letter to someone to invite them along with you. In the letter:– Explain what has happened and that you would like them to come – Give details of when the trip will take place – Inform the person of the things they will need for the trip
Hi John,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter to invite you to Hawaii
Correct article usage
a Hawaii
trip
along
with me.
Change preposition
apply
Firstly
, my company recently celebrated the
20th anniversary with a Change the word
its
day long
Add a hyphen
day-long
events
where all the employees were invited to the company headquarters. We had multiple activities which Fix the agreement mistake
event
includes
football, basketball and Wrong verb form
included
lucky
draw for a Correct article usage
a lucky
trip
to Hawaii. Fortunately, my name was selected in the lucky draw. The winner gets two tickets for a trip
and I want to invite you for this
trip
.
Moreover
, this
trip
is planned between Oct 5th - 9th. Hope you will make yourself free for this
wonderful trip
. As you know, Hawaii is well known for it's
clear water beaches and water Replace the word
its
sport
activities. Fix the agreement mistake
sports
This
ticket includes multiple activities jet skies, scuba diving and para gliding
. Correct your spelling
paragliding
Thus
, please make sure you bring suficient
summer clothing, goggles and casual Correct your spelling
sufficient
wears
.
Please feel free to Fix the agreement mistake
wear
conatct
me if you have any questions or need Correct your spelling
contact
further
information.
Your loving friend,
WilliamSubmitted by earulmurugan on
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task achievement
Include a brief description of how much you look forward to the trip to enhance the emotional connection in the invitation.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to proofread for minor spelling and grammatical errors, such as 'sufficient,' 'it's,' and 'contact.'
task achievement
The letter has a friendly and inviting tone, which is suitable for the context.
coherence cohesion
The structure is logically organized, with clear paragraphs for each main point.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,