Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case ? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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A number

of problems are associated with kids

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most of their

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on phone

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.I personally believe that it is

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to discuss the same

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issue in the subsequent paragraphs. Diverse points can support the problems generated

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phenomena. The principal among all is,

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that children

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spend several hours in front of

screens

effect badly on their

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,

due to

over stimulation

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for

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immature

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system

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making them

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all the

time

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,

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and addicted to phone

screens

.Apart from that , most

of

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young people

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social skills by not going out and socialising with others and learning to communicate with their peers which

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negatively their adulthood in future. As every cloud has

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lining,

this

predicament can be solved by taking some plausible

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. Primarily ,

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new hobbies and organising

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day by

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streak schedule

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example,

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for

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,

for play

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playing with

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others and

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also

learning new

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it

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going to fill

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time

and challenge them to learn more about their new hobbies. In conclusion, can be inferred that

no doubt, spend

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a lot of

time

on phone

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badly on

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heath

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health

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and social skills ,

Nonetheless

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that is

the solution

for

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that problem to learn new hobbies and organise their

time

.