The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two line graphs show the number of
hours
spent by housewives on housework and the percentage of homes with appliances from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, it is noticeable that with a gradual increase in the percentage of electrical house appliances, there was a significant decline in hours
on house chores
that housewives spent during the almost 100-year period.
In 1920, housewives spent about 50 hours
a week
on housekeeping. However
, by 1940, this
time
had decreased to 30-40 hours
a week
. In such
a short period of time
, homemakers managed to reduce the time
spent on cleaning by almost 20%. By 1960, the hours
spent on chores
had decreased to 20 hours
a week
. It is interesting that in the period from 1980 to 2000, the time
for chores
remained virtually unchanged. This
was due to
the fact that during this
era there were no technological changes that could simplify household chores
. However
, by 2019, technological progress has made a significant step forward and the time
spent on housekeeping has decreased to 10 hours
a week
. In the future, this
time
will probably continue to decrease as technology does not stand still and continues to simplify the process of working at home, which makes life much easier for homemakers.Submitted by sa_artek on
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