In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Today, a lot of
people
have access to a wide range of
foods
which are produced worldwide in
supermarkets
. I
completley
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completely
think it is a positive development in
the
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our world, and
i
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explain it in
this
essay. On the one hand,
this
access to a wide range of
foods
increase
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welfare
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the welfare
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of
citizinsee
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citizens
. it means they can find different fruits and other
food
products
in their
supermarkets
, and
as a
result
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result,
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this
helps them to have a wider
deit
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diet
.
Also
,
these varitation
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in
food
products
improve their
overall
well-bing
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well-being
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because they can eat different
foods
with different nutrients and
menralls
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minerals
mentally
.
For instance
,
people
who live
in
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northern
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the northern
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side of the earth
which
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have
less
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fewer
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suny
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sunny
days, and
as a
result
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they suffer from
lack
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a lack
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of vitamin D, so they can use
foods
from
southern
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the southern
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side of
earth
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the earth
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which
inrich
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enrich
rich
in vitamin D.
Moreover
,
these varitation
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of
foods
in
supermarkets
increase
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increases
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awareness of
people
about other
cultuers
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cultures
.
While
they eat different
foods
from all over the world, they find more information about their
cultuers
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cultures
. So,
this
leads to
golbalization
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globalisation
throughout the world, and
people
can share their culture
with
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exporting their
food
products
. In human history, we can find loads of examples which is
people
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people's
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aqueintance
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acquaintance
acquaintances
with other cultures through
food
products
such
as sugar, tea, and coffee. In short,
supermarkets
with a range of imported
food
products
can lead to increasing communication among
people
worldwide.
To sum up
, consumers have access to different
food
products
in
supermarkets
, and
this
help
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them to have a better
walfare
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health
,
health
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and health
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and
also
know about other cultures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrition
  • cultural exposure
  • competitive markets
  • economic boost
  • employment opportunities
  • carbon footprint
  • environmental impact
  • local produce
  • food security
  • global supply chain
  • sustainable practices
  • consumer choice
  • market dynamics
  • price competition
  • agricultural sector
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