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The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words. » You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words. » You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The given table illustrates the prevalence of 6 different mobile
phone
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 brands in
the
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stores all over the world during the
years
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 2005 and 2006.
Overall
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, we can see that
Nokia
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the Nokia
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 mobile was the most popular among people during both
years
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 and contributed the highest to the retail share.
Whereas
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, BenQ company saw the least sales during
this
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 time period.
Additionally
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, Samsung lost its customers slightly and was less sold in 2006 compared to the earlier year.
To begin
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 with, Nokia stayed at the top of the mobile
phone
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 market and its demand soared from 32.5% to over a third of the total mobile
phone
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 market in just a single year.
This
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 was followed by Motorola with a large difference of about 45% from Nokia in both
years
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 (17.7% and 21.1% respectively). A similar rise in the popularity of Sony Ericsson mobile was
also
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 observed,
however
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 it stayed at less than 10% for both
years
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.
On the other hand
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, some
phone
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 companies saw a decline in their demand and sold fewer sets of phones.
For example
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, the retail shares of Samsung,
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LG
, and BenQ Mobile, were lowered, with a considerable downward plunge noticed with the BenQ Mobile company, when its shares fell from 4.9% to almost half at 2.4% over a year.
Lastly
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, some miscellaneous phones were
also
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 less purchased by customers during the mentioned duration.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words phone, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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