The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.
The line chart illustrates the number of cars
stealing
per thousand vehicles in four different countries during 10 years.
Wrong verb form
stolen
Overall
, it is clear most car thefts
occurred in Great Britain over the 10-year period, although
there was a slight decrease towards the end. Car stealing was
increased sharply in Sweden Verb problem
theft
while
the opposite of
Change preposition
apply
it
happened in Canada. In France, the number of car Correct pronoun usage
apply
thefts
remained relatively stable.
From 1990 to 1999, most thefts
of vehicles were in Great Britain, approximately 18 thefts
per 1000 vehicles, then
peaked at 20 in 1996 before falling dramatically to about 12 in 1999. In Sweden
the act of stealing goes up from about 8 to presumably 13 in a Add a comma
Sweden,
10 year
period.
From the starting year till Add a hyphen
10-year
the
1999, Change the article
apply
thefts
Correct article usage
the thefts
of
Canada and France remain more or less the same. They started from 6 and 7, Change preposition
in
accordingly
. The
end of the Change preposition
At the
10 year
period they would Add a hyphen
10-year
reached
the same level approximately 6.Change the form of the verb
reach
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