Living in the country where you must speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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you have a serious problem with misunderstanding and miscommunication.
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idea. Because of
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issues like,
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barrier or everyday
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we had a major difficulty.
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trouble for foreign tourists, is
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barrier.
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kind of glitch
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us uncomfortable. One of the main issues when foreign visitors find misunderstanding in their everyday
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as shopping or just eating outside.
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, social isolation
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people feel
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lonely,
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depression
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gives them a lot of opportunities
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that they are not clever or something else.
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, when I was in Turkey, nobody
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Turkish or English lingo, but only I
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speak English with flying
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, thanks
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find our things when they were
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. Another reason why
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can make a mistake
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travelling. So,
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lack of understanding. There is a risk of cultural misapprehension that vacationer vocabulary skills are lacking and
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them social faux pas.
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, it should be noted that knowing another lingo gives you more
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and possibility
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them without trouble. If you want to find a job or excelling a workplace can
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without
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of
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the lingua
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franca.
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, in South
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they have
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of knowing
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Korean or English
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. In conclusion,
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in
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alien countryside
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a chance to
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their native tongue and proficiency significantly improves their chances of finding a
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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