Living in the country where you must speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Living abroad where
,
you have a serious problem with misunderstanding and miscommunication. Remove the comma
apply
This
essay agrees with this
idea. Because of this
issues like, Correct determiner usage
these
language
barrier or everyday Correct article usage
the language
situations
we had a major difficulty.
Add a comma
situations,
First
trouble for foreign tourists, is Correct article usage
The first
language
barrier. Add an article
the language
a language
This
kind of glitch make
Change the verb form
makes
for
us uncomfortable. One of the main issues when foreign visitors find misunderstanding in their everyday Change preposition
apply
situation
Fix the agreement mistake
situations
such
as shopping or just eating outside. In addition
, social isolation when
people feel Add a missing verb
is when
themselves
lonely, Remove the pronoun
apply
Correct word choice
and depression
depression
. Replace the word
depressed
This
impressions
gives them a lot of opportunities Change the determiner
impression
think
that they are not clever or something else. Fix the infinitive
to think
For example
, when I was in Turkey, nobody know
Turkish or English lingo, but only I Wrong verb form
knew
can
speak English with flying Wrong verb form
could
colour
, thanks Fix the agreement mistake
colours
for
Change preposition
to
this
we can
find our things when they were Wrong verb form
could
miss
.
Another reason why Wrong verb form
missed
traveler
can make a mistake Fix the agreement mistake
travelers
while
they were
travelling. So, Wrong verb form
are
this
is cultural
lack of understanding. There is a risk of cultural misapprehension that vacationer vocabulary skills are lacking and Correct article usage
a cultural
this
give
them social faux pas. Change the verb form
gives
However
, it should be noted that knowing another lingo gives you more confident
and possibility Replace the word
confidence
understand
them without trouble. If you want to find a job or excelling a workplace can Fix the infinitive
to understand
difficult
without Add a missing verb
be difficult
knowledges
of Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
lingua
franca. Correct article usage
the lingua
For example
, in South Korea
they have Add a comma
Korea,
a
various Correct article usage
apply
of
professions, but for Change preposition
apply
this
authority
you need Add a comma
authority,
ability
Add an article
the ability
of knowing
Korean or EnglishReplace the preposition
to know
linguistic
.
In conclusion, Correct word choice
apply
live
in Wrong verb form
living
a
alien countryside Change the article
an
provide
a chance to Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
learning
their native tongue and proficiency significantly improves their chances of finding a Wrong verb form
learn
well-community
.Replace the word
good community
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