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The pie charts below show the different types of courses, which were followed by the students during the years of 1984, 1994 and 2004.

The pie charts below show the different types of courses, which were followed by the students during the years of 1984, 1994 and 2004.
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The pie graphs illustrate various types of
courses
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 for students in three separate years, 1984, 1994, and 2004.
Overall
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, face-to-face
courses
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 contributed the largest share throughout the survey,
whereas
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 online
courses
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 had the smallest.
Moreover
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, online
courses
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 emerged as a new category in 1994. The figure for face-to-face
courses
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 ranked first in 1984 (67 %) and declined by 13% in 1994 before declining slightly to 40% in 2001. In comparison, the percentage of mixed media was responsible for 13%, which was followed by a dramatic increase to 35% in 2004. In the first year, the share of correspondence was 20% of the total, after which it levelled off for five years.
This
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 is followed by a noticeable fall of 5% in the
last
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 year. At
first,
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online
courses
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 were not part of the options, followed by a considerable growth to 11 % before declining minimally by 1 per cent in the end.

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