The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The bar

chart

illustrates the prediction of

jeans

sales for the next year for two Turkish companies.

Also

, the pie

chart

forecasts the percentages of the

market

of the two manufacturers of

jeans

at the end

of next year.

Overall

, it is expected that Jack &

Jones

will sell more

jeans

than the

Mango

company in the next year.

Also

according to

the projection of the

market

, we expect that

Mango

and Jack &

Jones

companies have half of the shares together.

According to

the bar

chart

Mango

is expected to sell close to 150

thousand

jeans

pairs in January.

While

the figure will remain stable until April, it will rise dramatically to 450

thousand

pairs in August.

Then

, it will not experience any changes until November, and

finally

, it will reach 600

thousand

in December. The figure for Jack &

Jones

started at 450

thousand

in January and fell to 250

thousand

in February, but it is expected to increase steadily to 400

thousand

in June. After experiencing some fluctuations, it will reach a new peak of 900

thousand

pairs in December. Looking at the pie

chart

, which shows the percentage of

market

, we can see that 30% of all

jeans

market

is expected to be for Jack &

jones

, and 20% for the

Mango

According to

the forecast, 50% will be obtained by other vendors.

Submitted by amir1375.6 on Mon Jul 01 2024

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, jeans, market, share, jones, mango, thousand with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

232 words

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