The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.

Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar
chart
illustrates the prediction of
jeans
sales for the next year for two Turkish companies.
Also
, the pie
chart
forecasts the percentages of the
market
share
of the two manufacturers of
jeans
at the end
of next year.
Overall
, it is expected that Jack &
Jones
will sell more
jeans
than the
Mango
company in the next year.
Also
,
according to
the projection of the
share
market
, we expect that
Mango
and Jack &
Jones
companies have half of the shares together.
According to
the bar
chart
,
Mango
is expected to sell close to 150
thousand
of
jeans
pairs in January.
While
the figure will remain stable until April, it will rise dramatically to 450
thousand
pairs in August.
Then
, it will not experience any changes until November, and
finally
, it will reach 600
thousand
in December. The figure for Jack &
Jones
started at 450
thousand
in January and fell to 250
thousand
in February, but it is expected to increase steadily to 400
thousand
in June. After experiencing some fluctuations, it will reach a new peak of 900
thousand
pairs in December. Looking at the pie
chart
, which shows the percentage of
market
share
, we can see that 30% of all
jeans
market
share
is expected to be for Jack &
jones
, and 20% for the
Mango
.
According to
the forecast, 50% will be obtained by other vendors.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, jeans, market, share, jones, mango, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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