The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on

different items in five different countries in 2002.
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The chart below illustrates the comparison of five European countries in spending money
for
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different items in the year
of
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2002.
It is clear that
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Turkey
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and
Ireland
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saw the highest proportion of expenditure on food,drink and tobacco
also
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Spain
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had the lowest proportion of national consumer expenditure on leisure and education. In detail, the figure for eating in
Ireland
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was 28.91 %,
whereas
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that of Sweden was lower at 15.77%.
Turkey
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accounted for the largest percentage of consumption
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food and beverage in 2002
while
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that of Italy was 16.36%. In
Spain
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, people only 18.80% of their salary
spent
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on eating. The figure for
Ireland
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on spending money on clothing and footwear was approximately equal to that of
Spain
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and
Turkey
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6.51% and 6.63% respectively. Italy had the highest proportion of consumer expenditure on clothing and footwear
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9 per cent,
whereas
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that of Sweden was lower at 5.40%. The figures for leisure and education in Italy and Sweden were almost equal about 3.20%. The percentage of leisure and education in
Turkey
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stood at 4.35%.
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the figures for
Spain
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and
Ireland
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were lower at 1.98 and 2.21%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words turkey, ireland, spain with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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