It is better for students to live away from home while studying at univeristy than to live with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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. Based on my experience. It will make the

students

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more independent. As a

student

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who

live

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far from

home

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because I have to go to university, I can

fell

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more advantageous than disadvantageous of

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.

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, the

student

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will learn how to survive without

rely

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on their

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. In

this

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case, the survival skills of them will

be build

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.

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, they can tackle all of

problems

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in their life. They will try to search the path to solve the struggles.

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, if they are far from their

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they will realize that they are really live their

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and vice versa.

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thing can happen because they are not seeing each other for a long time.

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, the

students

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have a chance to define her or himself. What I mean by

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is a

human

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have to know who they are and

for

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what they do in

this

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world. By the problems and the pathways that they choose, they can more appreciate anything that the

parents

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do for them

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. there are

also

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disadvantageous if the

students

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are far from home.

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, both

of

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the

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and the

students

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will feel sad for some time and it may

affects

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their productivity.

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, the

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student

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students

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, potentially, feel they are alone. Sometimes, it is hard for the

students

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to express their

feeling

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or tell everything to their

parents

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when they are far from their

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. It is because they do not want their

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to feel

worry

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.

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, before

send

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the

students

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to go

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to university, the

parents

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and the

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student

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students

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have to discuss

about

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it. It is

because

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an important decision to

made

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. For me,

live

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far from home is something that the

students

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can try because it

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will

be worth,

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at

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the end.