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The table compares the production of carbon dioxide in five countries in 2017 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table compares the production of carbon dioxide in five countries in 2017 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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 compares carbon dioxide production in five countries in 2017 and 2018, detailing
per person
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emissions
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 in 2017 and total
emissions
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 for both years In 2017, the US had the highest
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emissions
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 at 20.1
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, followed by India (15
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), Russia and Japan (both 10
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), and China (6,6
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). Total
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 were highest in the US at 5682
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tonnes
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, which decreased slightly by 2% to 5568
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tonnes
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 in 2018 China had significant growth, with
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 rising by 11% from 5130
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tonnes
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 in 2017 to 5694
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tonnes
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 in 2018. India's
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 increased by 8% from 1259
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tonnes
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 to 1359
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tonnes
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. Russia's
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 saw no significant change, remaining around 1700
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tonnes
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, and Japan's
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 remained stable
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 around 1190
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tonnes
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.
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 China and India increased their
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, the United States reduced its
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 slightly, with Russia and Japan showing stability
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