The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
The diagram illustrates the new changes in a public library compared to 20 years ago. In general,
this
library has witnessed significant changes including displacement and new construction. Having looked at the two given maps for more details, CDs, videos, and computer games
room
was moved to the bottom right
corner
. Its old position was replaced by the children's fiction
books
region which is moved from the upper left
corner
. The adult non-fiction
books
area was eliminated and replaced by adult fiction
books
, between the lecture
room
and cafe. The old reading
room
(newspapers and magazines) was renamed to the all-reference
books
area and moved on between the children's
books
and computer
room
. The second change in the library is that more buildings were built. The cafe was constructed behind self-service machines.
Besides
, the lecture
room
was architectured in the upper left
corner
, in front of the information desk region.
In addition
, there are more sofas and storytelling events that are combined with children's fiction
books
in the upper right
corner
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, corner, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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