The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
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The diagram illustrates the new changes in a public library compared to 20 years ago. In general,
this
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library has witnessed significant changes including displacement and new construction. Having looked at the two given maps for more details, CDs, videos, and computer games
room
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was moved to the bottom right
corner
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. Its old position was replaced by the children's fiction
books
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region which is moved from the upper left
corner
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. The adult non-fiction
books
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area was eliminated and replaced by adult fiction
books
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, between the lecture
room
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and cafe. The old reading
room
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(newspapers and magazines) was renamed to the all-reference
books
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area and moved on between the children's
books
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and computer
room
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. The second change in the library is that more buildings were built. The cafe was constructed behind self-service machines.
Besides
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, the lecture
room
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was architectured in the upper left
corner
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, in front of the information desk region.
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, there are more sofas and storytelling events that are combined with children's fiction
books
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in the upper right
corner
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, corner, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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