You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to request you to change the
room
provided to me
due to
certain issues that I am getting through. At present, I am staying in
room
number 13 of block 2 and sharing it with Mr. Robin Kundra who is notorious for his long late-night parties and noisy lifestyle.
Although
I have tried to discuss
this
issue with him, there was not any positive response. The problem is getting worse every day and I am not able to concentrate on my studies anymore. I tried to study under the ground light at night as the library closes at 5 pm.
However
, as my finals are approaching next month, I need to devote as much time as I can to my studies, which is not possible here.
Hence
, It would be a great relief if you allot me a separate
room
or shared
room
with a mature and silent student. No other preference may be required. I look forward to hearing a quick and necessary action from you. Yours faithfully, John Brown
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task achievement
Include specific examples or scenarios to provide more context to your complaints. This will help strengthen your argument.
coherence cohesion
Try to vary sentence structures to enhance readability and interest.
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You clearly described the situation and the problems you are facing.
coherence cohesion
The letter follows a logical structure, making it easy to read.
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Your tone is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for this type of letter.
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