You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to request you to change the

room

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provided to me

due to

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certain issues that I am getting through. At present, I am staying in

room

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number 13 of block 2 and sharing it with Mr. Robin Kundra who is notorious for his long late-night parties and noisy lifestyle.

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I have tried to discuss

this

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issue with him, there was not any positive response. The problem is getting worse every day and I am not able to concentrate on my studies anymore. I tried to study under the ground light at night as the library closes at 5 pm.

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, as my finals are approaching next month, I need to devote as much time as I can to my studies, which is not possible here.

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, It would be a great relief if you allot me a separate

room

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or shared

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with a mature and silent student. No other preference may be required. I look forward to hearing a quick and necessary action from you. Yours faithfully, John Brown

Mrjit147Wed Jul 03 2024

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Include specific examples or scenarios to provide more context to your complaints. This will help strengthen your argument.

coherence cohesion

Try to vary sentence structures to enhance readability and interest.

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You clearly described the situation and the problems you are facing.

coherence cohesion

The letter follows a logical structure, making it easy to read.

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Your tone is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for this type of letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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