Women
indeed play a crucial role in society. These days, a large number of
mothers
stay at
home
and look after their family members,
hence
, some say that these
mothers
should be paid
salaries
by the government. I strongly disagree with
this
statement and
this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To begin
with, the authorities should not give
salaries
to homemakers because
this
will encourage to all
women
stay at
home
without going to work.
This
is,
women
can work and earn
money
by themselves; they use their talents and academic
qualificationFix the agreement mistake
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jobs, if the government pays
salaries
to them,
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do not come out with their small circle.
For example
,
women
should be independent
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financially
as well as
emotionally but careers only bring
this
situation of
women
freedom
.
Hence
, the authorities should not pay any
salaries
to
mothers
who are at
home
on the grounds it affects
women
's
freedom
.
Furthermore
, housewives should not receive
money
from the ruling party as a
salary
because
this
impacts their talents and career perspectives.
This
is,
women
also
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that's why they study
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degrees than men but if the authorities pay
salaries
to
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who look after their family as a
salary
,
consequently
,
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do not have a chance to achieve their dreams
besides
, their's thoughts and ideas are being very narrow space.
For instance
, the government should offer plenty of employment opportunities to homemakers, so they can earn
money
by themselves
instead
of providing
salaries
to them.
Then
, housewives should not get
money
from the ministry as a
salary
for staying at
home
and taking
care of their families.
In conclusion,
mothers
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their whole life
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look after
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, even though, they do not get earnings from the ministry as a
salary
because it affects their
freedom
, financial independence, career perspective, talent and skills.
Therefore
, I strongly disagree with
this
statement
due to
it impacts
women
's
freedom
.