The graph shows the rates of participation in three different activities in a UK sports club between 1983 and 2003.

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The line graph illustrates how many UK citizens

who take

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took

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part in swimming

clubs

, team sports

clubs

and gym

clubs

from 1983 to 2003.

Overall

, there was an increase in the proportion of club members in team sports

clubs

and gym activities,

while

the number of people who enjoy swimming saw a downward trend despite its start point being the highest. From 1983 to 1998, there was a slight increase in the rates of members in the team sports

clubs

, from just over 30% to around 40%, after which it experienced a gradual fall to 40% in 2003. Significant growth was witnessed in the percentages of residents who participated in gym

clubs

, from under 10% to 30%, before ending the period at just over 30% As for swimming

clubs

, their

members

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number

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reached a peak of 50% in 1983 and

this

percentage decreased constantly until they accounted for 20% in 2003.

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The graph shows the rates of participation in three different activities in a UK sports club between 1983 and 2003.

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