Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: • Your reason for writing • What you would like to happen • A nice, respectful style.

Dear Mr. John, I am writing to let you know about a discomfort that I have to face because of your dog. I know how difficult it is to manage a pet and work at the same time. These days I am working from home
due to
a fracture of my knee so I have to attend meetings online.
Hence
, your dog barks the whole day and at night as well, it is a barrier to my concentration. I have been trying to let go of
this
matter for a few days, but yesterday one of my colleagues asked me to reduce background noise because it can be irritating for the clients. I already sent an email to you, but no one responded, so I thought to tell you again through
this
letter. I adore pets a lot, but
this
is my humble request to you please check up on your dog's health with the veterinary doctor to find out why he is behaving like
this
, or else try to find another solution. Hoping for the prompt protection, Yours faithfully, DKP
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single idea per paragraph
Consider breaking down longer paragraphs into shorter ones to enhance readability and clarity.
logical structure
Ensure that your purpose for writing is explicitly stated at the beginning of the letter to avoid any ambiguity.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is appropriate for communication with a neighbor.
greeting and closing
Logical structure is generally well-maintained, and the closing is appropriate.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • disrupted
  • challenging
  • appreciate
  • solutions
  • training
  • anti-bark collars
  • excessive barking
  • resources
  • well-being
  • distress
  • amicably
  • cooperation
  • concern
  • neighbourly relations
  • understanding
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