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The maps below show changed in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show changed in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps
illustrates
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illustrate
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 the
city
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 of Nelson in 2000 and today. 
Overall
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, the
city
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 of Nelson has undergone a
comlpete
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complete
 transformation with the addition of new facilities
such
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 as
restaurant
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a restaurant
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,
new
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a new
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 supermarket and a new store. Looking
further
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 into the details, in the
city
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centre
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 has been added a new bike
centre
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. In the north-east of the
city
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 has chopped trees down and replaced with new shopping
centre
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. In the north-west has been constructed a hall of residence. The university
remain
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remains
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 relatively untouched.
However
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, there is a new
tramiline
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tramline
trampoline
 across to
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city
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the city
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centre
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. The train station has been replaced above the university. The road
pss
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pass
trhough
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through
though
 the
city
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 has been pedestrianised.
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, in the south-east and south-west
has
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have
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 been developed
a bars
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bars
a bar
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, clubs and a new restaurant respectively. Meanwhile, the old
markert
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market
 has been
tured
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turned
 into a new shop. A new covered market has been built near the
city
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centre
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.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • modifications
  • upgrades
  • facilities
  • commercial areas
  • residential zones
  • green spaces
  • recreational facilities
  • industrial areas
  • environmental conservation
  • eco-friendly
  • pollution control
  • distinct difference
  • notable change
  • expansion
  • decline
  • transformation
  • enhancement
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