The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in опе country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information Ьу selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.

The line graph illustrates the

stores

that stopped operating and those that started operating from 2011 to 2018.

Overall

, it is immediately apparent that the number of both closed and newly established

stores

decreased. In 2011, the number of closed and opened

stores

stood at approximately 6,500 and 8,500 respectively. In the following year, the

stores

that started operating plunged to less than half the starting figure.

By contrast

, the

shops

that shut down were only 500 less than the original. Over the next three years,

although

there were fluctuations in the closed

shops

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the opened

shops

made a steady rise, both

shops

recorded just over 6,000 in 2014. In the following year, opened

shops

decreased by 2,000 but closed

shops

made a dramatic decline to only around 500. There was a plateau in the opened shop figures around 4,000 from 2015 to 2017 with a fall by 1,000 in 2018.

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the closed

shops

made a sharp rise to a little over 5,000 in 2016 and

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plateaued around

this

same value in 2018.