The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in опе country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information Ьу selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.
The line graph illustrates the
stores
that stopped operating and those that started operating from 2011 to 2018. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is immediately apparent that the number of both closed and newly established Linking Words
stores
decreased.
In 2011, the number of closed and opened Use synonyms
stores
stood at approximately 6,500 and 8,500 respectively. In the following year, the Use synonyms
stores
that started operating plunged to less than half the starting figure. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the Linking Words
shops
that shut down were only 500 less than the original. Over the next three years, Use synonyms
although
there were fluctuations in the closed Linking Words
shops
Use synonyms
Linking Words
whereas
the opened Correct word choice
apply
shops
made a steady rise, both Use synonyms
shops
recorded just over 6,000 in 2014.
In the following year, opened Use synonyms
shops
decreased by 2,000 but closed Use synonyms
shops
made a dramatic decline to only around 500. There was a plateau in the opened shop figures around 4,000 from 2015 to 2017 with a fall by 1,000 in 2018. Use synonyms
Meanwhile
the closed Add a comma
Meanwhile,
shops
made a sharp rise to a little over 5,000 in 2016 and Use synonyms
also
plateaued around Linking Words
this
same value in 2018.Linking Words
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