The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
The given table illustrates the figures of
people
from five different European nations living in each other’s countries in a certain year. Overall
, German people
had the highest number of people
who lived in other countries and in contrast
, Polish people
had the least.
First and above all
, most British people
(550.000) preferred to live in Poland
while
they had a small number of people
who lived in Spain, at 71.000. However
, Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of Germans Fix the agreement mistake
number
people
who lived in Italy were
556.000 and just 104.000 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
people
preferred to live in the UK. Poland
also
Add a missing verb
was also
most
popular country to live in for Italian citizens in 2011 Add an article
the most
a most
while
Spain was the least, at 106.000 and 19.000 respectively.
On the other hand
, Polish people
who live in other countries had significantly small numbers compares
to other nations, only 6.000 in 2011. Wrong verb form
compared
Additionally
, Poland
was the most popular country to live for
British individuals and Italians Change preposition
in for
while
it was the least popular for Spanish people
. Nevertheless
, Spanish people
mostly prefer to
the UK to live in, at 391.000 and just 86.000 Change preposition
apply
people
preferred
Wrong verb form
prefer
Poland
to live in, in the given year.Submitted by nur.kaya on
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