The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied thay were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The table illustrates how many
people
had
visited the Ashdown Museum in the years before and after its refurbishments, Unnecessary verb
apply
whereas
the pie charts demonstrate the rate at which visitors
were satisfied with their visits.
Overall
, it is evident that after the redevelopment, not only the satisfaction rates but also
the number of museum attendees went up.
In the year
before the museum was refurbished, it had 74,000 visitors
. However
, this
figure surged significantly to more than 90,000 visitors
in the year
after.
Before redevelopment, around half of the people
visiting were dissatisfied, while
a mere 15% of them were very satisfied and 30% satisfied. In the year
after, in comparison, people
reported more satisfaction, with the majority of them being satisfied and very satisfied at 35% and 40% respectively, accounting for well above 70% of the whole proportion.
Dissatisfaction rates, on the other hand
, dwindled by more than 25%, accounting for 15% of the visitors
in the year
after. Similarly
, very dissatisfied groups also
sharply declined from 10% to 5%. Notably, the proportion of people
not responding to the survey remained unchanged at 5%.Submitted by bita.rezaei7052 on
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