The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The supplied diagram depicts information on the vacation to
oversees
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overseas
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by
Japanese
travellers
within
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between
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1985 and 1995.
In addition
, the chart displays the proportion of
Japanese
tourists market in Australia.
Overall
, the listed bar chart clearly showcases the upsurging
trend
of
Japanese
tourists travelling abroad for 1 decade.
Also
, the
noteworrthy
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noteworthy
drift experienced a slight
occiliation
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oscillation
conciliation
between 1990 and 1991. To commence with,
according to
the
Australias
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Australian
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share, the initial figures of
Japanese
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the Japanese
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travellers market comprised slightly more than 4
millions
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million
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individuals in 1985 followed by a moderate incline in 1986, 1987, 1988, 1989 and 1990 years, resulting in a modestly fewer than 6, a solid 7, a bit more than 8, almost reached the ceiling of 10, and a firm 11
millions
of
Japanese
travellers
at the end
, respectively.
Instark
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In stark
contrast to the previous years of
stable
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uprising of values, 1991 encountered a little downturn approximately of 10.5
miilions
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millions
million
of
Japanese
tourists. As regards the 2 following years, the
trend
incosiderably
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inconsiderably
inconsiderable
considerably
went up
until
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to
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a solid 12
millions
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million
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whereas
1994 kicked off the exceeding
trend
with a vigorous increase of almost 14
millions
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million
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. Correspondingly, 1995 splendidly proceeded the
trend
with a tremendous acceleration of roughly 15.7 million
of
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in
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Japanese
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the Japanese
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voyagers market.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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