The table below gives information on consumer spending on different iters in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different iters in five different countries in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table depicts the spending pattern of consumers in three different categories in five
countries
in 2002.
Overall
, it’s clear that the highest expenditures share were related to the food, drinks, and tobacco group, but leisure and education had the minimum quota in all given
countries
, including Ireland, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey. To commence with, the food, beverage, and tobacco category had the highest figures in all
countries
and Turkey was
above all
with 32% followed by Ireland with 28% and others numbers were between 20 to 15%.
In contrast
, the recreation and education group had the lowest outlays in national consumer expenditures with less than 5% among surveyed
countries
. Spain with 9.5 was the minimum
while
Turkey with 4.3% was at the top.
Moreover
, the apparel group percentages were between 5 to 10%. Italy with 9% was
above all
, and Sweden with 5% showed the minimum expansion figure.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "above all".
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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