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Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
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 of people moving from rural to urban areas in three countries from 2000 to 2020, with projections for 2025. It can be seen from the graph that the trend increased moderately in all countries from 2000 to 2020.
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, the forecast shows significant increases for
Country
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 A and
Country
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 C,
while
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 it remains stable for
Country
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 B. In 2000, the
number
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 of people moving from rural to urban areas in
Country
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 A started at almost 20
million
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.
This
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number
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 increased steadily, reaching approximately 30
million
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 by 2005, 50
million
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 by 2010, and peaked at around 70
million
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 in 2020. For
Country
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 B, the
number
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 of people was around 10
million
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 in 2000.
This
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 figure grew gradually to 15
million
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 by 2005, 20
million
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 by 2010, and tripled to 30
million
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 by 2020.
Lastly
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,
Country
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 C's population began at less than 10
million
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 in 2000. It rose steadily to 20
million
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 by 2005, 50
million
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 by 2010, and escalated to almost 80
million
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 by 2020. For the projections in 2025, the trends for
Country
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 A and
Country
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 C are expected to reach their highest numbers, with more than 80
million
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 and almost 100
million
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 respectively. Meanwhile, the trend for
Country
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 B in 2025 remains steady, with a population of 30
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, country, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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