The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the changes that occurred to
a
road access to Remove the article
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a
city hospitals in the years 2007 and 2010.
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Overall
, it is evident that while
the parking spaces have expanded, providing both convenience and accessibility to Correct word choice
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vositors
.
In 2007, the hospital road right in front of the hospital was lined with six bus stations. To the Correct your spelling
visitors
immidiate
east of Correct your spelling
immediate
this
area, a car park was located, suitable for both staff and public visitors.
In comparison, in 2010, whole
six bus stations were replaced by a bus station on the west of the hospital road, merging with it at its two ends with two roundabouts. Regarding parking spaces, that for staff and Correct word choice
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public
were Correct article usage
the public
seperated
and Correct your spelling
separated
public
car park was relocated to just east of the hospital. Add an article
the public
However
, the size of each of these car parks were
almost doubled.Change the verb form
was
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