The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the changes that occurred to
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road access to
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city hospitals in the years 2007 and 2010.
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the parking spaces have expanded, providing both convenience and accessibility to
vositors
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visitors
. In 2007, the hospital road right in front of the hospital was lined with six bus stations. To the
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east of
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area, a car park was located, suitable for both staff and public visitors. In comparison, in 2010,
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six bus stations were replaced by a bus station on the west of the hospital road, merging with it at its two ends with two roundabouts. Regarding parking spaces, that for staff and
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were
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separated
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car park was relocated to just east of the hospital.
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, the size of each of these car parks
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almost doubled.
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