The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph gives information about the consumption of junk food among Australian adults between 1975 and 2000.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the amount of
pizza
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and hamburgers witnessed a dramatic increase. Meanwhile, fish and chips experienced a significant decline.
To begin
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with, the number of consuming fish and chips by Australian teenagers was the highest in 1975 at 100
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per year. Throughout the years, chips and fish consumed had a sharp decrease, it reached around 39
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for each year in 2000.
On the other hand
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, consumption
fast
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of fast
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food including
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and hamburgers was the least common among Australian consumers in 1975 approximately eight and 10 respectively. The amount of
pizza
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and burgers rose dramatically throughout the years. In 1995
pizza
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remained stable until 2000 about 83
times
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of eating each year.
In addition
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, hamburgers had a peek in 2000 at 100
times
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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