Some people prefer to live with a roommate.Others prefer to live alone.Compare the advantage of each choice.Which of these two options do you prefer? use specific reasons to support your answer.
Nowadays , Some
people
want to live with a roommate while
others prefer to live alone. Each situation has its own merits and demerits . In this
essay, I will discuss both views with some examples from articles and newspapers In the end, I will conclude this
essay with my opinion.
To begin
with , Some people
prefer to share their room
and flat with different people
. The reason for this
these people
feel isolated and stressed when they are alone . Even though, staying alone in a city is very expensive as some people
cannot afford this
and choose to live on a sharing basis. For example
, During my college days , One of my college friends chose to stay in a single room
rather than sharing in the hostel. One night she had severe pain in her stomach even though she could not move from the bed. As she was alone in her room
nobody was there to help her. As a result
next day her parents came to the hostel and decided to move her with someone
.
On the other hand
, Few people
would like to stay alone because they love their privacy and they believe that sharing a room
with someone
can be the reason for losing their focus on the main objective . A recent survey done by M.B.A students from Delhi University revealed that working people
never want to share their room
with students. For Instance
, An MBBS student doing her internship at Max Hospital and her roommate was a musician so keep doing her practice till midnight which affected to studying student's sleep and score thus
she decided to shift to a single room
.
To conclude
, In my opinion, I always prefer to stay with a roommate rather than stay alone because it is always economical and moreover
, if you live with someone
,makes you feel happy. I believe that sharing your things with someone
shows your caring nature and bonding with others which is useful further
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coherence cohesion
The essay could benefit from a clearer logical structure. Some paragraphs feel a bit disconnected. Make sure each paragraph smoothly transitions into the next.
task achievement
More specific examples and evidence would strengthen your arguments. Try to add more detailed and varied examples to support your points.
task response
The essay provides a balanced discussion of both viewpoints, showcasing an understanding of different perspectives.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion clearly present the main idea and wrap up the discussion well.