The diagram below shows how the leather goods are produced
The diagram illustrates the step-by-step operation of producing
leather
products from animal fur. Overall
, there are eleven steps in the process, beginning with drying the animal fur and finally
the production of consumer products.
In the first step, the animal skin is dried and transported to the factory by using a truck. In the factory, the fur undergoes washing progress where it is soaked in a mixture of water and lime to remove any impurities. Following washing, the skin is soaked again, this
time in a solution containing only lime.
The next step is
flattening, where the soaked leather
is mechanically processed to ensure it is smooth and even. After the soaking stages, the skin is soaked in a tannin bath, which contains water and vegetable matter. This
step, known as tanning, helps protect the leather
from rotting.
After flattening, the leather
undergoes a polishing technique to enhance its appearance and texture. Finally
, the finished leather
is transported to another factory where it is crafted into various leather
goods such
as shoes, bags, and other products.Submitted by checkmyessay9 on
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