The diagram below shows how the leather goods are produced

The diagram below shows how the leather goods are produced
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The diagram illustrates the step-by-step operation of producing
leather
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products from animal fur.
Overall
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, there are eleven steps in the process, beginning with drying the animal fur and
finally
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the production of consumer products. In the first step, the animal skin is dried and transported to the factory by using a truck. In the factory, the fur undergoes washing progress where it is soaked in a mixture of water and lime to remove any impurities. Following washing, the skin is soaked again,
this
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time in a solution containing only lime.
The next step is
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flattening, where the soaked
leather
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is mechanically processed to ensure it is smooth and even. After the soaking stages, the skin is soaked in a tannin bath, which contains water and vegetable matter.
This
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step, known as tanning, helps protect the
leather
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from rotting. After flattening, the
leather
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undergoes a polishing technique to enhance its appearance and texture.
Finally
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, the finished
leather
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is transported to another factory where it is crafted into various
leather
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goods
such
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as shoes, bags, and other products.

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