The graph below shows the average monthly chnages in the prices of three metals during 2014

The graph below shows the average monthly chnages in the prices of three metals during 2014
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The line graph describes the monthly percentage changes in prices of
copper
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,
nickel
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and zinc in the
year
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2014.
Overall
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, In the first month,
nickel
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was the leading
profit
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and the least
profit
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was zinc but
at the end
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of
year
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vice versa,
whereas
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copper
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was the second
profit
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in the beginning and remained the same throughout the
year
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. The
nickel
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proved the highest
profit
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6% and the second leading was
copper
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2% in the month of January. following that
nickel
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showed a sharp surge in the next two months up to 1% which
then
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continued to decline till November as lost up from -2% to -3%. In the meantime,
copper
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depicts pleated throughout the
year
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with a sharp dip in the months of May and June and by the end of
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year
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the year
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, both began to gain
profit
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of 1% and 1.5% respectively. The least profitable one was Zinc compared to others around 1% which showed a dramatic increase of 3% and
then
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gradually decreased over the period but earned a superior
profit
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of up to 2% compared to others
at the end
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of the
year
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, year, profit with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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