The graph below shows the average monthly chnages in the prices of three metals during 2014
The line graph describes the monthly percentage changes in prices of
copper
, nickel
and zinc in the year
2014.
Overall
, In the first month, nickel
was the leading profit
and the least profit
was zinc but at the end
of year
vice versa, whereas
copper
was the second profit
in the beginning and remained the same throughout the year
.
The nickel
proved the highest profit
6% and the second leading was copper
2% in the month of January. following that nickel
showed a sharp surge in the next two months up to 1% which then
continued to decline till November as lost up from -2% to -3%. In the meantime, copper
depicts pleated throughout the year
with a sharp dip in the months of May and June and by the end of year
, both began to gain Add an article
the year
profit
of 1% and 1.5% respectively.
The least profitable one was Zinc compared to others around 1% which showed a dramatic increase of 3% and then
gradually decreased over the period but earned a superior profit
of up to 2% compared to others at the end
of the year
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