Developments in technology are causing environmental problems. Some think the solution is for people to adjust to a simper life while others believe that technology itself can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

The technological revolution nowadays is the reason

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environmental deterioration, and some believe that simplifying living

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is the

solution

to

this

issue

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while

other people think that environmental issues can be solved by using technology itself.

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personally support both

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as modern life can consume a lot of the world's natural resources, and that technology could be part of the

solution

as well. On

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hand, altering into a simpler lifestyle can be a perfect

solution

to hinder the

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utilizing many unnecessary new

insturments

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instruments

in the house could

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in

overconsumtion

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overconsumption

either in

water

or electricity. Eventually,

this

can lead to resource depletion as the country

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to fulfill the demand.

Moreover

, these devices may produce

water

pollution if any toxic chemical is introduced, as it will enter the

water

sewer system and

finally

be discharged to a

water

body and contaminate it.

To sum up

, moving towards

simpler

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lifestyle with less amount of modern devices is going to dramatically reduce harmful environmental

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effects

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.

On the other hand

, using renewable energy sources

such

as wind and solar energy can reduce the reliance on fossil fuels, which will decrease

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pollution and preserve

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natural resources.

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results in

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economical

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growth

as well as

cleaner

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environment. In conclusion, as some people think that changing

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a simple lifestyle is the

solution

towards

cleaner

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environment others think of

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technology as the best

solution

. I would agree with both

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of view as they can be considered as a practical and real

solution

towards sustainability.