The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The change in
road
accessibility to a health centre in 2007 and 2010 is portrayed by
two
maps. The maps
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used various icons
such
as compass, bus stop icon and roundabout figures to tell the directions concisely and easily. On the whole, the town hospital is situated in the middle only but there is a change in the path connecting the ring and city
road
. In 2007, there was a simple straight way connecting the
two
whereas
, three years later
this
path was morphed into a rectangle surrounded by the
two
traffic circles.
To begin
with, In 2007 there were three bus docks on both
the
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sides of the hospital
road
, six in total.
Besides
, to the east of the hospital
road
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there was a combined car parking for both the staff members
as well as
for the patients.
However
, three years later, the parking slot was split into
two
divisions. The Employees can park their vehicles at the same spot
while
the patients can leave and reach their vehicles along the exit gate of the city hospital.
Additionally
, the bus station was relocated
in
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/to the left of the hospital street.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, two with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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