The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the cost of adult should be shared.
The bar graph compares seven factors that motivate
people
leading them to educate themselves. The pie chart illustrates their opinion on how the tuition cost must be divided among taxpayers, employers and themselves.
Overall
, according to
the bar graph, most people
study for their interest in the subject, comparitively
a very low percentage studies to meet Correct your spelling
comparatively
people
. While
it is clear in the pie chart that people
choose to pay the largest proportion of their fee
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fees
also
aspire to be supported by the government and their employers.
The bar graph shows that the maximum number of people
(40%) indulge in education due to
their interest in the subject, while
a similar percentage - about 38% study to gain qualifications. around 20% people
each educate themselves as it helps them with Change preposition
of people
in
their job, and increases prospects of promotion. What is striking is that an equal amount of individuals study for Change preposition
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enjoyment
of learning and studying. Educating ones' self to change jobs and meet new Add an article
the enjoyment
people
is only the belief of 12% and 9% people
respectively.
Moving on to the pie chart, Change preposition
of people
it is clear that
individuals want to pay 40% of ther
fee on their own. Correct your spelling
the
their
However
, they suggest that 60% of their tuition fee should be shared by external sources. These are the taxpayers and their employers, which
are suggested to contribute 25% and 35% respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
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