7. You're working overseas in an international company. You are leaving the country in emergency. Write a letter to your friends explaining the situation. In the letter, you should - apologise for leaving like this - explain what happened - tell them what you're going to miss about working with them
Dear Ramesh,
Hope you are doing well. I am
writting
Correct your spelling
writing
this
letter regarding leaving the country in emergency
. Please understand my situation.
I am working overseas in an international company. First sorry for all Add an article
an emergency
this
matter. I am inform
you. I am Wrong verb form
informing
sudnley
leaving Correct your spelling
suddenly
this
country. You know about my familey
. My Correct your spelling
family
mother
health is not good. So many Change noun form
mother's
issue
in Change to a plural noun
issues
body
. For Correct pronoun usage
my body
exampel
blood Correct your spelling
example
suger
,heart Correct your spelling
sugar
problem
and etc.
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
More over
, I really missed that time Correct your spelling
Moreover
spend
with you Wrong verb form
spent
on
work.Rami you are the best person in our Change preposition
at
working place
. If I need every time stand with me.
Correct your spelling
workplace
Hopefully
you understand my Add a comma
Hopefully,
condiction
.
Your Friend,
Tilak Raj,Correct your spelling
condition
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task achievement
Try to provide more detailed information and specific examples about what you will miss in the workplace. This will help deepen your response and show a fuller engagement with the task.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single main idea. In this case, you could separate the apology, explanation, and what you will miss into clear, distinct paragraphs.
task achievement
Consistently use correct spelling and grammar. For example, correct 'writting' to 'writing', 'familey' to 'family', and 'condiction' to 'condition'.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which supports coherence and cohesion.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is appropriately conversational and friendly, fitting the context of writing to a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,