You are unhappy about the plan to make your local app bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper in your later. Explain where you live. Describe the problem. Give reasons why you do not want this development.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m writing with regards to the article in your newspaper dated 17th July.
My house is situated just 15 minutes, walking distance to the airport. As it is so close, I am facing lots of serious problems
due to
that and after listening to this
news, it seems like the situation is going to be worse.
First of all low- flying airplanes
are extremely destructive. Thanks to that, it increases noise pollution to a large extent and Change the spelling
aeroplanes
also
affects health. I’m suffering from insomnia because I used to wake up late on night flights. Not only that, the enlargement of the airport needed huge space so the government took a common playground, where our kids used to play.
This
is my humble request to your company to write an article on the problems I mentioned above. This
is not only my issue. Others who live near the airport are also
bothered by such
indispensable things.
Hoping for your prompt action,
Yours faithfully,
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coherence cohesion
Consider refining the structure of your letter. Organizing your points more clearly will improve readability and coherence.
task achievement
Expand on the impact the airport expansion might have on the community and environment to reinforce your argument.
task achievement
Good use of formal tone appropriate for the task.
coherence cohesion
Effective use of greeting and closing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite