You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue into late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter: explain what will be happening offer your apologies in advance invite her to join the celebration Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr / Ms _________ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

#graduation #party #saturday #night #people #barbecue #neighbour #offer #apologies #advance #celebration #mr #ms #_________ #minutes

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Dear Mrs.

dman

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man

I will write

this

letter to inform you I will arrange my graduation

party

next Saturday. Hope you are

good

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well

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, Actually tomorrow I am going to graduate after

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apply

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year

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years

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hard

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of hard

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work and patience. Because of that,

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and my classmate

arrange

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arranged

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party

Moreover

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Moreover,

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we will

doing

Verb problem

have

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outdoor

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an outdoor

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barbecue and some outdoor

activies

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activities

and it will

getting

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get

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over around midnight. So,

In addition

, I will apologise to you because I know you will

getting

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get

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disturb

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disturbed

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.But I will take care of you to finish my

party

as soon as

and

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possible and

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will not

create

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make

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much noise.

Morever

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Moreover

, I will really feel very happy If you

are

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also come

have also come

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also

come

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this

party

. I will invite you

for

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my graduation

party

. thank you your Gursewak

singh

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Singh

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Ensure to maintain formal tone throughout the letter and avoid contractions such as 'I'll' and 'you're'. Use 'I will' instead.

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Pay attention to article usage and grammatical structures. For instance, 'I am writing' would be more appropriate than 'I will write'.

coherence cohesion

End the letter with a more formal closing, for example, 'Yours sincerely, Gursewak Singh'.

coherence cohesion

Organize paragraphs so each contains a single idea. For example, separate the paragraph apologizing for the disturbance from the paragraph inviting the neighbor to join the party.

coherence cohesion

Ensure logical flow between sentences by using connectors and transition words more effectively, such as 'Additionally', 'Furthermore', etc.

task achievement

The letter covers all the necessary information: the event, an apology, and an invitation.

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The tone is polite and considerate, which is suitable for the context of addressing an elderly neighbor.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

126 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

outdoor barbecue
celebration
guest list
estimated
disturbance
inconvenience
extend an invitation
cordial
presence
honor
fostering a sense of community

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